Obelisk, the Tower of the Sun God, a world where several universes and dimensions intersect. Inside, he found a hidden diary in which was recorded By the time you hear this, I guess I will be already dead. One day, a pocket watch left by his brother returned to his possession. The manwha will or has already degraded into an above average challenger manwha, which will rot in people’s bookmarks due to its lack of appeal - well it would for me. Yeon-woo had a twin brother who disappeared five years ago. The world-building is great initially, but I wished the manwha elaborated more on the mc’s abilities as his involvement in fights is practically none for whatever reason.
Another issue with game-world type stories, applicable to this, are the ungodly amount of stats that are added which won’t even be impactful to the story or memorable until it’s whipped out of the author’s arsenal of plot. In other words, there will be no rival (Leveling with the Gods), no love interest (Second Life Ranker), or character development for the mc since development is mainly driven by influence. The massive turn-off for me in this manwha is the purposely designed plot point of the main character remaining solo for the rest of his adventure. First thing I want to note on is the massive amount of plot holes: repetition of the same challenges despite formerly created pieces leaving an impact and the oblivious/idiotic mob-mentality characters. The first two chapters were amazing by setting up the world and plot line for the rest of the story, but it only goes down from there. This is so painful to read due to the fact that it had such a large amount of potential to be great. eon-woo had a twin brother who disappeared five years ago.
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